Reviewer: Terry
Title: Chapter 14
Date Signed: 08-13-08

Hey DK! Googled "Willaim Buffy fanfic" and found your story! Really enjoying it so far! Very sweet story starting with Buffy and William growing up together - your teaching experience is showing! LOL! It's very easy and natural how their relationship comes about. And I definitely "feel" your knowledge of the characters. William feels studious, shy, reserved - but sweet, patient and protective - with just that "hint" of passion lying beneath the surface. Likewise Buffy is energetic and outgoing with innocence and compassion. Your humor amazes me! Some of it it just LOL FUNNY! And I was so with Buffy in the scene above - "Who says I'm wearing any panties at all, William." MUWAHAHAHA! :D I like how you've woven the Buffy/Angel characters into a "non-Verse" story! SMART! And I'm LOVING your William! Was confused as to why you thought "we" wouldn't like William - but I guess you have more story to cover... ;) At this point - I still like him! Great story! Can't wait for the rest! -T

Reviewer: Varin
Title: Chapter 10
Date Signed: 07-20-08

I stumbled across this fic while looking for good Spuffy. It's a good all-human. I like that you waited 10 chapters to get them in bed. Nice job with building your world and characters. (I loved the scene where she thinks he's gay, and the aftermath with Liam.) I'm curious about what comes next.