Reviewer: jnharrow
Title: Chapter 11: Back on Track Again
Date Signed: 02-05-08

I like that you've got a great plot going in this story. You have so many things going on: Buffy's capture and the demon clans, whose culture you're showing a little bit so they aren't cardboard villains, Margot's scheming which we're not totally filled in on yet, and Ethan Rayne manipulated into being helpful. Add in the wizards' council's dilemma and the possibility of helping Joyce and you really have a doozy of a plot. It feels fleshed out and I can't figure out when or what the next twist will be, which is nice. Of course, too, the Spuffy interactions are lovely. :) I hope Spike can find Buffy in time.

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