Reviewer: sarah
Title: Chapter 14
Date Signed: 10-17-07

omg! i love it, i can't wait for the rest of the story. i've been dying for someone to write a storyline after "chosen". i was so depressed the way that they killed spike at the end, then again, wasn't everyone? i've been searching all over for a good story that nails the characters but still has a good plot. i can't wait to read the rest!!! more soon please i have to have some closure. i'm deperate here, it shouldn't have ended, damn them!!! anyways, thnx again can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: kaoya
Title: Chapter 1
Date Signed: 10-11-07

It was alright, not nearly as engaging as the other fanfictions found here but you've certainly got me hooked as to wondering what it is about Spike that's changed. The asterixes between paragraphs makes reading it a frustration for me though, as usually I take it as a symbol that the story's moved to an entirely different scene/time/place. I also personally advice that more descriptive words and a broader vocabulary when you write so it's more engaging and realistic for the audience, and for you not to rely on using "And" so much as a sentence starter as you do this occasionally. That's all- keep it up!