Reviewer: danni
Title: Part 29-32
Date Signed: 12-10-08

this story is great cant wait for updates danni

Reviewer: leah
Title: Part 29-32
Date Signed: 07-28-08

omg! this is so different than the other fanfic! it's really good, can't wait to hear more.

Reviewer: Tamsyn
Title: Part 29-32
Date Signed: 11-27-07

Like so many others I remember reading this stry chapter by chapter when you posted on a yahoo group, and I've just had the enormous pleasure of reading it again - although the very last part felt new - I seemed to remember it finishing with him pounding on the door, but I'm very glad it finishes on an almost acceptable note, although I would dearly love for you to write more. Thanks again for writing something so wonderful, and I pary that one day you may return to finish what you started. *hugs*

Reviewer: Erin
Title: Part 29-32
Date Signed: 10-18-07

omg i love it........ please repost soon

Reviewer: Kimber
Title: Part 29-32
Date Signed: 10-28-06

Oh Patti I miss you and I miss this story and any other one that might be popping around in her head begging to be set free....... come back come back Kimber

Reviewer: Stella
Title: Part 29-32
Date Signed: 09-23-06

Please, oh please, tell me you're going to finish this story. Great story idea. I LOVE the way that you're writing the relationship between William and Melanie. You do such a great job with Melanie's character. I especially loved the first meeting and the trip to Disneyland. I couldn't stop grinning at the pictures that you painted. :)