Reviews
Reviewer: sister cuervo
Title: Part 14
Date Signed: 11-28-08
Very well done! The characters really speak and there's loads of intriguing loose ends left over for a sequel, too. The ending is perfect.
Reviewer: jess
Title: Part 14
Date Signed: 07-22-08
im glad for your little note at the end. im curious to know what ending you personally put on the story in your mind, but i suppose im not going to find out. for me, he doesnt get his soul back. im glad buffy finally gets over not feeling anything and really understands and accepts herself for once. its also great that xander is the one that helps her do it. this story really made me realize more than anything else that buffys issues with the soul and all have more to do with herself than spike at all. this felt like one big psychology lesson, in a good way. i've never had so much to say about a story before, but im not going to bore you with more details. the actual story was great, and if there were grammar or spelling mistakes i didnt notice them because i was too caught up in the story, which is saying something. you are a great writer and i look forward to reading more of your work.
Reviewer: poppe
Title: Part 5: Decisions
Date Signed: 06-25-08
well done
Reviewer: buffy big boobs
Title: Part 5: Decisions
Date Signed: 05-31-08
nice one m8t x
Reviewer: bob
Title: Part 1: Choices
Date Signed: 05-30-08
gr8t fic xx
Reviewer: Gail
Title: Part 14
Date Signed: 12-14-07
Really liked this story. I think you got Buffy's dithering over the soul aspect just perfect. A sequel to this story would be great, even though I, personally, don't think that Spike NEEDS his soul, it seems a shame that he went to all that trouble for it just to sit in that bloody amulet. I also think his soul is a bit vulnerable in there, after all, there are still a lot of 'nasties' out there that might want to use it for evil purposes.
Reviewer: caia
Title: Part 14
Date Signed: 08-30-07
Nice. I liked how you handled Spike's ambivalence over wanting the soul back (independent of what Buffy wanted), and I liked the open end.
I think in my head, Spike goes without the soul at least for awhile, until he really believes Buffy loves and trusts him without it, until there have been tests of that trust that she passes. And then he chooses. Not sure I have a final choice in mind. I just like that it can be his own.
Reviewer: Katerfelto
Title: Part 14
Date Signed: 04-12-07
Thank you. I liked that a lot. /// The point where the story came alive for me was when Spike told Buffy it wasn't impossible for her to lose him. A Spike that can't leave Buffy, no matter what, is either pathologically obsessive or dependent, or a bit of a cartoon character. Giving him the choice (cf. Dame Ragnell) makes all the difference in the world. /// I thought the characterization of Giles was a little flattened and dogmatic. Travers might have been able to insist that a sleepy, low-key vampire bent on raiding the refrigerator was an obvious threat, but I have to believe that Giles' sense of humor would keep him from doing the same. /// Your handling of Angel was startling and scary, especially the scene where he headtrips Spike. Angel may have a soul, but he also has all of Angelus' memories and strategies. I can't think of many instances where both sides of him have been so visible at once. /// Once again, thank you for the story.
Reviewer: emmee
Title: Part 14
Date Signed: 08-24-06
your story was awesome! i really, really enjoyed it! you were very true to the characters and the dialogue was very BtVS! AWESOME work!